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玼瑕
附帶說明幾個比較明顯的嘈點
首先,女主畫雀斑是因為畫醜妝在花街能有效免於被襲擊的風險……
這個論點跟,穿得比較不暴露就比較不會被強爆一樣,很智障、真的很智障。甚至在許多不是賣弄智慧的智障少女漫裡,女主都直接男裝、誰跟你連毀容都構不到邊的雀斑醜妝當掩護?如果女主是天真無邪小妹妹也就罷了,偏偏在小地方又想表現出女主在花街看多了、比後宮小宮女們更有閱歷?!
再來就是因為以前有發生過事情、所以太醫都要切了才能進來喔~以致於後宮只剩庸醫~而女主的養父曾擔過太醫但出事被肉型離宮but還要聲明女主養父背後家族皇室都不敢得罪喔&養父被肉刑驅逐已經是輕輕放下&對照白粉事件關禁閉還是減薪了事,啊這不是很敢得罪嗎?
還有這樣那樣所以搞出換子的腦洞主意,然後也這樣那樣地男主冒充宦官然後一票後宮不忌諱地想勾搭過來~~
還有後面不曉得怎麼寫的,但女主的生父其實念念不忘女主母親然後就跟妓院銷磨好幾年等到把病重的女主媽接回去一年後就隔屁了,但又想表達出妓院主人&紅牌&女主養父&女主生父重感情的一面……所以就為了演出重感情大風車,讓女主媽拖著重病的身子給這票人演瓊瑤演個好幾年?
嗯……或許只要CP夠香就好……
3 months ago
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首先,女主畫雀斑是因為畫醜妝在花街能有效免於被襲擊的風險……
這個論點跟,穿得比較不暴露就比較不會被強爆一樣,很智障、真的很智障。甚至在許多不是賣弄智慧的智障少女漫裡,女主都直接男裝、誰跟你連毀容都構不到邊的雀斑醜妝當掩護?如果女主是天真無邪小妹妹也就罷了,偏偏在小地方又想表現出女主在花街看多了、比後宮小宮女們更有閱歷?!
再來就是因為以前有發生過事情、所以太醫都要切了才能進來喔~以致於後宮只剩庸醫~而女主的養父曾擔過太醫但出事被肉型離宮but還要聲明女主養父背後家族皇室都不敢得罪喔&養父被肉刑驅逐已經是輕輕放下&對照白粉事件關禁閉還是減薪了事,啊這不是很敢得罪嗎?
還有這樣那樣所以搞出換子的腦洞主意,然後也這樣那樣地男主冒充宦官然後一票後宮不忌諱地想勾搭過來~~
還有後面不曉得怎麼寫的,但女主的生父其實念念不忘女主母親然後就跟妓院銷磨好幾年等到把病重的女主媽接回去一年後就隔屁了,但又想表達出妓院主人&紅牌&女主養父&女主生父重感情的一面……所以就為了演出重感情大風車,讓女主媽拖著重病的身子給這票人演瓊瑤演個好幾年?
嗯……或許只要CP夠香就好……