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Benjamin May on Kiana Ahmadi: The Hooded Hero
A good trick to editing your own stories is to let them sit for a bit, then come back after about a… more
Benjamin May on Adoring December
As always, great writing! Keep an eye out for certain word choices you use, they sometimes stifle… more
Benjamin May on Destiny without Honour
Hey man, great premise. I always love a good Rebellion. I have some ideas that might help focus your… more
Benjamin May on Whisper house
I want more from this one. It does well with rhythm but I want to see more creativity from where you… more
Benjamin May on Sunglasses
Well done on meter, the pacing of it gives me an idea of what you're getting across. Be sure to… more
Benjamin May on Unhinged
A few spelling errors, good ominous tone, and a solid end.
Benjamin May on The Passing Of An Era
You make me want to read more. This world is interesting, and sets up a cool premise. Some syntax… more
Benjamin May on Shadow Vile Figure
Not really my thing but I enjoy the premise. I'd like to see more depth of character, maybe flush… more
Benjamin May on Cool Geeks, Punk Chicks & Smoothies
Amazing idea and a great title! I can't wait to get into this one.
Benjamin May on Eternity and Me
Awesome to see you writing more sci fi, your sense of scientific imagination is so unique and… more
Benjamin May on Tales From The Other World
@Shay Nioum, No problem, just invite me as a Beta or send me a doc invite on google.docs
Benjamin May on Tales From The Other World
Lovely and dark, I feel as if it was a cinnamon candy, I get the color red here, very deep and warm.… more
Benjamin May on Tales From The Other World
Haunting and morbid, I love it. Though I feel as if there could be more to this. The Good Doctor… more
Benjamin May on Christmas Contest with Chanwoo Bang (방찬우)! ✧
I loved doing this, and now I have a new musician to listen to. I'm so glad so many people… more
Benjamin May on The Dragonborne Project: A Novel
@shnuffeluv, I'd love it if you read Genepunk but your editing comes first. When you do read it,… more
Benjamin May on The Dragonborne Project: A Novel
I get that ',-_-,' I've been working on Genepunk since NaNoWriMo and it's still not done because of… more
Benjamin May on The Dragonborne Project: A Novel
AHHHHHHHHH another pseudo-BioPunk novel on Penana? Super excited @shnuffeluv! I can't wait to see… more
Benjamin May on BloodPen Arena~Bout TEN! TAKE A LOOK!
I am looking forward to seeing you judge these though @Comrade If you ever need another pair… more
Benjamin May on BloodPen Arena~Bout TEN! TAKE A LOOK!
Up to you man, it's the beginning of a new year so i wouldnt see it as a bad time to do it
Benjamin May on BloodPen Arena~Bout TEN! TAKE A LOOK!
@Comrade, In plan on making your life even more difficult amigbro. been getting a lot better… more