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Aretice N. Treader on Varvana's Gift
There are some parts where the narration is a bit awkward, but for the most part I really like your… more
Aretice N. Treader on Varvana's Gift
I'm finding this story very interesting! This world seems very complex, which I like, and I hope to… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
@Erica Hilliard, Ah, that would make sense.
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
Agh I'm also really curious to know if Theodric has underlying intentions (because he probably… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
As cold and numb as she feels, she can actually be pretty hot-headed and impulsive, huh? Haha,… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
!!! My odd little hunch was actually right??? I could be completely wrong, but I don't actually… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
Teárlag gave me such strange, creepy witch vibes for some reason. I'm not sure that's what you were… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
I wonder if the man-turned-bear is someone who will become important in Hania's life—Sidimund's… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
I wonder if Hania will try to mother/be closer to this next child (assuming she bears the child),… more
Aretice N. Treader on The Doctor: One is the loneliest Number
@Shadow15243, Oh! I'm sorry for mixing up your characters, then. I'll be happy to read the rewritten… more
Aretice N. Treader on The Doctor: One is the loneliest Number
Well, I'm glad you developed the principal's character a little more, even if the Doctor as the… more
Aretice N. Treader on The Doctor: One is the loneliest Number
I like how you included Ten in this story. I'm not sure I would have placed him as the principal,… more
Aretice N. Treader on The Doctor: One is the loneliest Number
Hi! I'm from the beta reading society. I just thought that I'd let you know that regardless of how… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
I honestly love how complex your characters are! Sidimund really confuses me because he seemed… more
Aretice N. Treader on War Crimes
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story. Also, this is actually… more
Aretice N. Treader on The Assassin The Soldier And The Thief
Seriously, I love how descriptive your writing is. Some of it seems to border on telling, but then… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
@Frances, Ah, okay, so I guess it doesn't really matter because it's from Hania's point of view.… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
@Frances, Ah, really? Now I'm really worried for Brisam. 😅
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
Hania has such complicated relationships with everyone. That must be exhausting. I'm a bit curious:… more
Aretice N. Treader on Widow of Highfire
That bear isn't giving me good vibes… Okay, to be honest, Brisam is pretty awesome, and he does… more
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