I'm gonna have to pressurize you for more. This is just too good. The way you described the surroundings coming to existence, the little details makes this overally awesome. The correct amount of foreshadowing is also good. 

I'm still confused about what's going on. Is it pre-abduction or not? How does he not realize that he's going into a story about himself? What's gonna happen? 

So many questions, so little answers.