Firstly, let me say I absolutely loved this. The way you write is very lyrical, almost poetic and it creates a very beautiful image!! This short story is extremely mesmerising so very well done! The only criticism I have (and this is just me being fussy so feel free to totally ignore me since it really is only a tiny criticism) is that you said it was based in England in the 14th century. The title Viscount wasn't introduced in England until the mid-1400's, which would be the 15th century. Admittedly it had been used elsewhere since much earlier, but since you specifically said England, I'd maybe adjust the century slightly.
Hey, thank you so much for reading The Nymph! And also thank you for pointing that out to me, I think I'll change it to the 15th century. But again you're awesome!!
The way you write is very lyrical, almost poetic and it creates a very beautiful image!!
This short story is extremely mesmerising so very well done!
The only criticism I have (and this is just me being fussy so feel free to totally ignore me since it really is only a tiny criticism) is that you said it was based in England in the 14th century. The title Viscount wasn't introduced in England until the mid-1400's, which would be the 15th century. Admittedly it had been used elsewhere since much earlier, but since you specifically said England, I'd maybe adjust the century slightly.