I really dug this story. I just can't stand most fantasy stories on sites because they just go all in without any bit of connection to the main character. Making him a college student grounds it for me and I can't wait for the next issue.
Also, great voice for the character. You're better than most at the craft. I'd love to see what you think of my work, if you have the time.
Thanks :) I pretty much read, listen, and write first-person POV stories. I still got improvements to make but I did get myself an editor lol. She's going to be busy. --I'd be happy to take a read of what you wrote. And if you write first-person stories (or Kevin Hearne [Iron Druid]), you may pick up a new fan XD/.
Hopefully this will get to shelves and add to the desperately needed male protagonist urban fantasy section.
Also, great voice for the character. You're better than most at the craft. I'd love to see what you think of my work, if you have the time.
--I'd be happy to take a read of what you wrote. And if you write first-person stories (or Kevin Hearne [Iron Druid]), you may pick up a new fan XD/.
Hopefully this will get to shelves and add to the desperately needed male protagonist urban fantasy section.