@Elliot White, The last line in the story was beautiful. I didn't find anything wrong. Everything was on point. The grammar, though I'm kinda bad at grammar myself, the plot, the characters, the conflict, the climax and the end. All of it was amazing! You are a talented writer!
Oh, thank you! Did you find anything strange about it? Or something you didn't like? I'm currently revising it, so it would be good to hear something from readers.