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Lavinia Scott

Kelly is R.I.D.I.C.U.L.U.O.U.S obviously she's really desperate...and definitely self-centered.

Both her and Janet are annoying me and the more I'm going further into the story the more I can't help but look down on them.

Honestly, if I was Jason (thanks Lord I'm not 'cause I would've ruined all of your next plans for the story), I wouldn't a bit feel guilty. Jason didn't do anything wrong, Kelly did. Is she forgetting that he went through the same pain when she turned him down?

Concerning her acting skills, I'll wait to see more, she's not really convincing for the moment (at least I'm not convinced) I mean, I need more to see how well and how far she can play that game, and I can't wait to see that.

I just hope Emily's going to be wise enough to handle all the mess coming.

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, I reckon you've already started imagining all sorts of endings for the story lol XD

7 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, You know what? I won't make the pleasure and delight to torture me so much. You, little...! Ugh...

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Uh... why should they be together? I never made promises :P This is so amusing XD

7 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Hahaha XD
All right, all right then. Make them suffer as much as you want, but in the end, they have to be together.

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, But...but...I worked so hard in collaboration with Kelly in making their lives hard! How can I not post those chapters?! XD

7 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Fine, I believe you but don't be too harsh on our little protagonists okay? *pouting*

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Nope she won't do anything childish. Trust me, you will change your opinions at least a little bit. I'm sure of that :D

7 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Me? Going softer on Janet? *scoffing* I would love to see how you're going to make me like her.

We'll see ^^

Well, I hope she won't do something stupid or childish.

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Yes, Kelly's really desperate to make Jason hers. You will grow softer on Janet after a while, trust me.
Well, she has fixed her mind on Jason and there's no telling her otherwise.
Oh, you will get convinced without any problem XD
You'll see Emily's reaction in the next chapter :D

7 years agoReply

Eliza Jones

I want Jason and Emily to be together FOREVER

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Btw, thanks for the random visit :D

7 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Hmmm, rooting for our main characters, eh? Well, as much as I'd like to spill some beans and let you know about the forthcomings, you'll have to wait to see what the remaining few chapters have in store for you :)))

7 years agoReply