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Cynderz
I really enjoyed seeing Chaos's point of few of the creation of the world. It became very clear that Order had used his brother to create life and did not care for Chaos's feelings for his creation. Having two siblings myself I know how it's like to have them take something that you worked hard on and change it or ruin it. It doesn't justify his actions but it sure has created more depth between the endless battle of Order and Chaos. There's nothing I love more than a villain who has good intentions but down right evil actions
4 years agoReply
Dlofc84
Changes your entire perspective about book one eh? I am trying to build them on the premises that, really, no one is right or wrong, but it is the actions of the people behind the concepts that make them good or bad. But, yeah if you take the original brothers, I much prefer the mischievous, curious, and erratic Chaos to his stiff, arrogant, and unyielding brother.
4 years agoReply
Dlofc84
Once more this is a disclaimer, even as I type I am wrangling a one year old. I am a father of four, as such my time for writing is fleeting at times and it is normally delegated to the wee hours of the morning. If you like what you have read please be patient with the forthcoming material, it will be published just slowly.
5 years agoReply
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