I'm really enjoying this story! Although I have to admit, when she mentioned wanting to play Moonlight Sonata, I started giggling. I was about her age when I started playing piano, and I would force my teachers to teach me really advanced pieces when I barely knew note names. I knew the original version of Moonlight Sonata, Fur Elise, and a bunch of Bürgmuller within 2 years of starting because I was so determined to prove to my teachers that I could play anything I wanted. XD
I agree with Frances, her imaginings while listening to music is great! While reading this chapter I was listening to moonlight sonata which I've always loved to began with. Dark and lovely. Great chapter. Your descriptions are great.