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雀
sponsored
500
for
Issue 45
!
終於看完了~(撒花
錢錢給你~
1 year ago
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生若虎
多謝又讚又打賞的雀🥳🥰
1 year ago
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雀
@生若虎
,不用客氣~
1 year ago
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愛吃草莓的Akili.
好看,太太還更更新嗎,完結了?
2 years ago
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生若虎
@愛吃草莓的Akili.
謝謝留言支~阿緊與肥環的故事完結了,他們變回平民繼續生活。
不過,倒是有個短篇沿用了部份設定,你看首幾段,感覺更這結尾的延續很相似~
https://www.penana.com/story/71122/%E7%AC%AC%E4%B8%89%E5%B1%86-aiken-%E6%96%87%E5%AD%B8%E5%A4%A7%E8%B3%9E-%E6%9C%AB%E4%B8%96%E7%98%9F%E7%96%AB/issue/3
2 years ago
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yulia尤麗婭
@生若虎
咦我好像會喜歡這個欸!
1984既視感+1,然而我原版跟村上版也還沒看cryyy
2 years ago
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生若虎
@yulia尤麗婭
哈哈,你竟然先看後傳XD
沒辦法,因為1984的想法太經典也太寫實~
2 years ago
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yulia尤麗婭
@生若虎
, 因為我以為是最近更新的haha 但不防礙我覺得好看的想法ww
2 years ago
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生若虎
@yulia尤麗婭
, 嘿,記得從一開始看喔,小心結局被爆雷~~
2 years ago
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yulia尤麗婭
@生若虎
,好~不過被爆雷再看,又是另一種樂趣嘿嘿
2 years ago
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周輝
嘻,後段很惹人追看,是以剛剛來到這裡了。
結局也很有1984的味道,只是總覺得好像還會有後續的樣子。
3 years ago
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生若虎
感謝看到這裡~
對於惡徒普及後的世界沒有太詳細描寫
如果再寫第二篇,會用其他角色的身份再去展示後續故事,因為男女主角已變回無知的平民了
3 years ago
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周輝
@生若虎
,若是我的話,我也會像你拆成不同的故事,來探討一個主題。說起來,之後會有其他人的故事嗎?
3 years ago
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生若虎
@周輝
, 有想的~從另一個角色,另一個角度探討,不過暫時未落筆🤣將來假如我沒被引渡就可能看到~
3 years ago
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應雨靜
故事完結了嗎?是不是分開不同寫或是每章之間都相隔了很久才接續下筆?
個人的小小建議是,故事橋段是可以的,但在當中很多地方有增潤的空間。
3 years ago
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生若虎
靳男和楊玉環的故事結束了,他們有個happy ending
但852區還沒,因為最後靳虹仍然在逃
3 years ago
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錢錢給你~
不過,倒是有個短篇沿用了部份設定,你看首幾段,感覺更這結尾的延續很相似~
https://www.penana.com/story/71122/%E7%AC%AC%E4%B8%89%E5%B1%86-aiken-%E6%96%87%E5%AD%B8%E5%A4%A7%E8%B3%9E-%E6%9C%AB%E4%B8%96%E7%98%9F%E7%96%AB/issue/3
咦我好像會喜歡這個欸!
1984既視感+1,然而我原版跟村上版也還沒看cryyy
沒辦法,因為1984的想法太經典也太寫實~
結局也很有1984的味道,只是總覺得好像還會有後續的樣子。
對於惡徒普及後的世界沒有太詳細描寫
如果再寫第二篇,會用其他角色的身份再去展示後續故事,因為男女主角已變回無知的平民了
個人的小小建議是,故事橋段是可以的,但在當中很多地方有增潤的空間。
但852區還沒,因為最後靳虹仍然在逃