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1 year agoReply

VaderZim7891

Hahaha gave me a good chuckle :)
I noticed a couple readability issues early on; “...isn’t is?” should be “...is it?” most noticably.

Other than that, some formatting to help show what’s a first-person thought or narration, rather than quoted text from a screen.

5 years agoReply

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