I just read through your first issue, and I'm no professional by any means, so my opinion probably isn't very valuable here. But I have to say, I loved this! It actually made me laugh out loud twice, which is very rare for me, and I just love the charming sarcasm that Emerald has. One thing though: I saw your story to be rated PG, and correct me if I'm wrong, but usually if a work contains any adult language, it would be PG-13. It doesn't affect ME negatively at all, it's just I don't want anyone falling in love with the story before they get to the parts with strong language, only to have to stop reading because of guidelines they have from their guardians about language in a story. I absolutely love this though, amazing work!
Thank you so much, firstly, for taking the time to read it, and secondly, for your kind feedback; it means a lot to me. I'm glad it made you laugh haha! Also, thanks for the advice about the rating ;)