I just reviewed this story on fictionpress, but after learning that you're more active on Penana, I thought I'd drop it here, as well.
This story thrives off the deep imagery and unique concepts. I believe this story truly has potential to be a longer work. The futuristic concepts and almost zombie-like themes are very relevant today, yet are still original to what you have created. You're writing style is creative and deeply descriptive.
Thank you very much! I will eventually be getting back into the short story game after the hectic process of publishing my novel has calmed down. I appreciate the time you took to read and review!
This story thrives off the deep imagery and unique concepts. I believe this story truly has potential to be a longer work. The futuristic concepts and almost zombie-like themes are very relevant today, yet are still original to what you have created. You're writing style is creative and deeply descriptive.
Keep writing!