I love that, though Anne is usually the head of the family, she still sometimes sees Mary as her older sister. And it's so heartbreaking that Anne can't see her daughter, and I'm hoping she will soon. Though I've never really liked Anne Boleyn, you write about her in a way that makes me sympathize with her.
I am so sucked in with this story. Anne is an amazing anti-hero, you are rooting for her but at the same time, shes not exactly likable. You had fleshed her out beautifully.
Very interesting alternative ending to the Anne Boleyn History chapter. I am quite intrigued, hooked actually, and await the author's next chapters weaving this storyline to a climatic outcome. Gripping sentences stream along carrying the reader swiftly from one arresting scene to another~ keep writing!