Wow, I'm really glad I decided to read this! I love this so much. It's very descriptive, and I like how it's set out, and I also really like the cover! :D
Just one thing that kind of bothers me - the paragraphs are quite long. It could just be me being fussy, but just having a huge chunk of text is kind of bothersome.
But apart from that, it was all really good! Can't wait to read more!
Just one thing that kind of bothers me - the paragraphs are quite long. It could just be me being fussy, but just having a huge chunk of text is kind of bothersome.
But apart from that, it was all really good! Can't wait to read more!
-Sunny