Where did you learn to write? It is great down to the detail with a natural flow. Plus like your taste of music (Loreena MacKennitt). I'll give another comment in the next chapter. ;-)
You are correct Marius Wolfgang was not the captian he was the head of the engineering department, and a lieutenant the circumstances of his crews tagic demise will be illustrated later.
Honestly, I haven't seen Zootopia yet. Though I have been meaning too.
So I find this quite interesting. I love the way the prelude ended, definitely sets up the story. I also love the characters so far. Even though Marius is the antagonist, you can't help to love a good villain. I love how you ended the last sentence with the title of the novel. It's interesting how you are turning this into a science fiction. The descriptions are wonderful.
Though I do have some questions though what time period are you making this take place? Is it the way future or near future. I am curious because it mentions Terra which Earth is sometimes referred to. Also, it says "His two loyal companions. The only two in the universe who were left standing by his side." Does that mean he had a crew before he this prelude?
This has caught my interest. I shall keep reading soon.
So I find this quite interesting. I love the way the prelude ended, definitely sets up the story. I also love the characters so far. Even though Marius is the antagonist, you can't help to love a good villain. I love how you ended the last sentence with the title of the novel. It's interesting how you are turning this into a science fiction. The descriptions are wonderful.
Though I do have some questions though what time period are you making this take place? Is it the way future or near future. I am curious because it mentions Terra which Earth is sometimes referred to. Also, it says "His two loyal companions. The only two in the universe who were left standing by his side." Does that mean he had a crew before he this prelude?
This has caught my interest. I shall keep reading soon.