I'm finding this story very interesting! This world seems very complex, which I like, and I hope to read more about it (as well as find out more about Liana's powers). Liana seems like she could be a very interesting character; I like how her morals and whatnot center around trying to get her father to be proud of her. I would've liked it if the background between her father and Pike had been introduced a little more smoothly, but I'm still interested in seeing where the story goes. :)