The plot is actually very good. I like how we learn about the murdering processby reading her written words in the interview. However, I agreed that the ending is a bit of a rush.
Btw, what does EMS stands for? Maybe you can clarify that and tell us a bit more about William Edwards?
Suggestion - Maybe Justice receive something (like an item or note) from William Edwards in the car which helped her to get over her emotions etc.? Just some thoughts.
Anyhow, Good Luck!
Btw, what does EMS stands for? Maybe you can clarify that and tell us a bit more about William Edwards?
Suggestion - Maybe Justice receive something (like an item or note) from William Edwards in the car which helped her to get over her emotions etc.? Just some thoughts.
Anyhow, Good Luck!