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simagination

Sorry I couldn't read all of this, I don't really go well with longer stories. I'm a HW and Linkle fan, though, so I had to check this out. I like the concept and the fact that you don't seem to pretend like every other person magically knows her story from the game, but that you fill the reader in little by little. I did notice some spelling and punctuation errors early on, since that's how far I came for now. That ' tilde is very nasty when it comes to abbreviations that can look like other words, like I'll and ill, your and you're (gotta watch out for those!)

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@simagination, Thanks! I spotted several errors, while posting them, though, so I need to go back and fix more stuff.

7 years agoReply

simagination

@Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Way to go XD

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@simagination, Okay, I've gotten the story up to date, all fifteen chapters!

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@simagination, I've been meaning to bring in the rest, don't know why it's taking me so long.

7 years agoReply

simagination

Take your time :)

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

It's alright, I'm glad you gave it a look at all, this is pretty long, on FanFiction.net I've posted fourteen(?) chapters of this, plus two spin offs, so...yeah, that'll be a lot.

Yeah, I think I saw what you're talking about, I've got some stuff to fix, huh?

7 years agoReply

I love it :D

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@JellyKat, It's a nice daydream for me, at least...to finish everything I start.

7 years agoReply

@Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, One day it'll happen.... Probably( not)

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

@JellyKat, Oh, I've got a few of my own that I need to update...one day!

7 years agoReply

@Kokiri-Hylian-Hero,
I don't think I've made anything longer than five chapters *nervous laugh*
My followers must hate me. Or forgot I even existed :/

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

I'm happy to hear it! Hopefully I'll be able to update to what's on FF so far, something like fourteen chapters, so it might be a while.

7 years agoReply

Seamus Brown

while reading this i kept imagining our role play days.... your style of role play shows here

7 years agoReply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero

Oh, really? I guess I've been writing a while, I guess I've been consistent since at least when I first role played, or would you say role playing helped me grow as a writer?

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