Though the action was exhilarating and I commend you for that, the action scenes were a bit too detailed, which lost me and were also very confusing to read
I see. Apologies if you got lost in it, I tried to keep it vague, while still putting in enough detail to give the picture of him going through the soldiers as if they were grass and he was a storm, which is where I got the idea for the title.
Thank you! Honestly, I got the inspiration for it from playing Assassin's Creed Rogue, and it was intended to be a short little story to amuse myself until I got tired, but perhaps I'll think about adding more to it c: