I liked your story but the end felt very abrupt. I feel like you could have added more to your story and made it so much more. However, I did like your descriptions and characters. Well done.
Thank you :) I was trying to make it a little abrupt, but if people noticed then I probably didn't do it quite right - but hey, that's learning! I don't know if I'll continue writing, but if I do I'll keep that in mind.
I don't know if I'll continue writing, but if I do I'll keep that in mind.