I really like the book but the problem I have is you will be talking about Ray then in the same sentence you will call him by Brayden confuses me a little.
I have been going through each chapter attempting to fix the issue. I kept getting confused as well so I’m working on only using ‘Brayden’ or ‘Valero’ when a character is talking to or about him. Its taking longer than i expected as theres quite a few that i miss