What an adrenaline inducing chapter! Very well narrated, interesting main character, and the suspense -oh, the suspense! This story is off to a wonderful start and I can't wait to read what follows.
@once upon a star, I wrote it on a whim, read it over, and decided to keep it forever. I love it just as much as you do :D Also I think it exposes the inner nerd I truly am.
It's actually one of the best introductions I liked here on penana..always made me smile! :')