Seriously, I love how descriptive your writing is. Some of it seems to border on telling, but then you provide really clear examples of what you mean. It makes it so much easier to understand the world you've set this story in.
I'm not sure what I think about this new contract. I'm a bit curious to know why the storeowner wants Garn dead so badly.
I'm not sure what I think about this new contract. I'm a bit curious to know why the storeowner wants Garn dead so badly.