This is fully edited thanks to Thalia. If you look in the Prologue is her wattpad screen name. She has been my editor and extremely helpful so far. And Thank You also to Cynderz:-P You have been extremely helpful too and an inspiration!!
This is an edited version of chapter one. The editor I am working with suggested some significant rewording and editions. There is nothing groundbreaking it just flows better.
if you read the prologue you may have noticed it shorten up dramatically. I decided to break the chapters up manually. It makes it easier to see the mistakes. For those who are reading it, please note and tell me all my mistakes (lord knows my wife does). I want to know the mistakes and I would love to recipocate some of the help back.