X
以 Facebook 帳號登入
或 註册/登入 以留言
bloodandfullmoon
You are also over the word limit, so I'll have to take that into consideration. Thanks for entering!
5 年前回覆
bloodandfullmoon
Its very creative, but you could improve your writing style more. Love it, though!
5 年前回覆
SnowTheUnique
Actually, my friend is the one who write it. I added some parts, helped with character development and ideas, and also fixed her grammar (im a grammar nazi) but she doesnt want to do the story anymore, so....
5 年前回覆
bloodandfullmoon
I see. That makes more sense. Your writing isn't as cohesive as it is collaborative. Thank you so much for entering!
5 年前回覆
SnowTheUnique
@bloodandfullmoon,I mean, I could continue it but I don't feel like it. It wouldn't be the same without her.
5 年前回覆
×
寫下你喜歡這個故事的地方
×
對此喜歡的人