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幻嵐
我有點看不懂,所以女人是男人,男人是女人?
那怎麼又說因為妳喜歡的是男人所以才會變成女人,等著他去愛妳?
5 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
你說得對。因為打錯字了^^~
正確來說應該是他為了自己喜歡的男人,而變性去當男人。
5 years ago
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幻嵐
@多媒體廢作人
,我找到錯字了///
5 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@幻嵐
,
對,辛苦你了^^~
5 years ago
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幻嵐
@多媒體廢作人
,我有很認真在看,還以為我哪裡漏看了w
5 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@幻嵐
,
其實這一篇故事有點「實驗風格」,想用最少最少的描述來玩這個故事,如舞台劇本,因此會看得很辛苦。
但如果對白中能夠表現出二人的感情給讀者知道,這「對白」也算是成功了。
另一樣是我的惡習,經常打錯字是我改不了的問題。
主因是太心急要完成一個作品,所以很少看清楚自己在寫什麼,想到便打,一直「啪啪啪」地完成打字的過程,直到故事完成。
還以為自己已經有所改善,原來只要一回到急著出故事的狀態,惡習自然回來了~~哈哈哈~~
充心感謝你的閱讀。
5 years ago
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幻嵐
@多媒體廢作人
,然後就被我點出了錯字,我也很常打錯字,打了這麼長一篇也才錯了一個字算不錯了
5 years ago
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@幻嵐
,
哈!那我們也應該好好加油了~~
5 years ago
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那怎麼又說因為妳喜歡的是男人所以才會變成女人,等著他去愛妳?
正確來說應該是他為了自己喜歡的男人,而變性去當男人。
對,辛苦你了^^~
其實這一篇故事有點「實驗風格」,想用最少最少的描述來玩這個故事,如舞台劇本,因此會看得很辛苦。
但如果對白中能夠表現出二人的感情給讀者知道,這「對白」也算是成功了。
另一樣是我的惡習,經常打錯字是我改不了的問題。
主因是太心急要完成一個作品,所以很少看清楚自己在寫什麼,想到便打,一直「啪啪啪」地完成打字的過程,直到故事完成。
還以為自己已經有所改善,原來只要一回到急著出故事的狀態,惡習自然回來了~~哈哈哈~~
充心感謝你的閱讀。
哈!那我們也應該好好加油了~~