Great story :) Same with Adoring December, the tenses got a little mixed up in the first bit, but after a while it got more consistent. And maybe, if you ever feel like it, you could develop the story more... for example, showing more of when Sebastien and Faye were mortal enemies, so the truce is more satisfying. Good work!!!
@madwoman-with-a-pen, Thank you!! I've thought about developing the story more but I wasn't exactly sure. Plus, I had ideas about my upcoming stories that I'm creating in my head lol