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It wasn't a bad chapter, and I like how you described the characters' appearance throughout the scene, but I felt like it lacked a hook. Other than that, I am curious to see if he'll find a new mate or fall in love again.
Jennie Camacho
Thank you so much. Yeah, I can see where the hook is pretty nonexistent. I am currently working on rewriting this chapter.
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