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葉嘉勞
thx
Tsunwai Wong
好睇，可以加多少少感情線加甜訂閱你
Tsunwai Wong
@葉嘉勞,平凡咁多條感情線都寫得好，你得既
Tsunwai Wong
@葉嘉勞,呢本仲好睇過平凡，一次次事件設定得好有趣，睇落有啲似無限流,如果可以繼續用事件形式去推進劇情都幾好，希望女鬼可以進化更高智能同主角有多啲互動，加啲心理對話去了解主角每一步既行為。暫時覺得主角性格都係有啲陰情不定 唔夠鮮明 唔知佢下一步會做啲咩
葉嘉勞
唔識加甜，同埋無咩人氣，有啲想收皮
愛吃貓的魚
很喜歡這篇小說，节奏感太棒了，加油！
葉嘉勞
多謝，可惜，人氣不佳
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