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You did an awesome job on that chapter I loved it! This chapter does a great job laying out the mechanics of Focus and its techniques in a clear, engaging way. The balance between power and stamina cost adds real depth to the system can’t wait to see how characters master and evolve with these abilities! Let’s talk about something I’ve been thinking in relation to your chapter.