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皮皮
我覺得菜根版比較順，因為詩詞講究韻律，你自己寫的念起來比較通順也磅礡有頓挫ouop
5 months agoReply
菜根
皮神可以猜，猜哪一個先出現~

AI版先~或菜根版先=V=~
5 months agoReply
皮皮
@菜根,應該是ai版，不過菜根底子不錯，不管哪版先，都寫得很好，意境有到位ouop
5 months agoReply
菜根
@皮皮, 竟然被你發現了！！！！！
對的~我先弄出AI版，然後感覺它實在寫得很破爛，所以就改一改0.0
5 months agoReply
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