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至冬 朝
啊。。。我。。。想起來艾莉亞。。。送了自己是埃及的重要的武器什麼官的情報給敵人了，，，，，。。。。。（頭撞桌子
5 years agoReply
鑽石心
拍拍秀秀~想起來就好~不要學艾莉亞的壞習慣啊~~XDD
5 years agoReply
至冬 朝
@鑽石心,放心不會的！通常我在煩惱時只會鬼叫不會冷靜思考！wwww
5 years agoReply
昇平
胡蘿蔔加鞭子？呃...是看露了什麼嗎XDD請問鑽大那是什麼意思w
7 years agoReply
鑽石心
這裡的確語意不明，交待的不夠清楚＞＜
那一段我有改寫了，不知這樣是否有好一點^^

昇平大大真的是非常感謝您，您是幫助我寫作進步的重要推手～謝謝^^
7 years agoReply
昇平
@鑽石心,有w其實我後來有想懂了哈哈。
7 years agoReply
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