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夢墨輓歌
從頭認真看起，發現主角突然有工作了XDDDD
4 years agoReply
白兔貓
因為一開始的職業設定並沒有寫死，所以我用職業讓我的部分更順暢。
另外，只要花點時間從頭看起，這篇故事有一個很有趣的脈絡，黑衣人出現->瞇瞇眼出現->美麗的大姐姐女子->瞇瞇眼出現->黑衣人出現，大家都很努力把故事線維持一個連貫性。
非常有趣。
4 years agoReply
夢墨輓歌
@白兔貓,原來是這樣w你觀察的好仔細！我都沒注意到慣性XD

4 years agoReply
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