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黑髮算是父親的定位嗎？

如果沒有血緣衝突，不至於被歸類為畸戀。


兩者相愛的徵兆要素較不明確。

可以用更多的互動細節，進行愛的表現。

另外，單向強加的戀情較偏向為病態、不單純。如果符合病態，或違反常識中的倫理道德，可以利用相應視角講述。

反之，可以透過特殊手法講述這段情感的結構，反應不同他人眼中畸戀的認識誤解。
4 years agoReply
夢塵
黑髮確實是父親的定位。

不過在寫的時候對於倫理衝突沒有寫得太突出確實是一大敗筆。

感謝你的建議～
4 years agoReply
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@夢塵,好的，謝謝你的回覆。
4 years agoReply
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