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Tenshi no Yami
Literally the beginning half of this I just kept saying "OBJECTION!" like it was a Phoenix Wright game. 
I was waiting for the judge to go "Order....ORDER!"
Edgeworth, where you at xD
5 years agoReply
Speedster
Aww man, misseed opportunity that! I was going for a Phoenix Wright vibe so I can't believe I forgot that part :(
5 years agoReply
Tenshi no Yami
@Speedster, its all good. I enjoyed nonetheless
5 years agoReply
Sargambelwanshi
Im one of those in his stomach..?
No prob πŸ˜…I guess after our death, our souls come out/escape/filter out(idk) of his burp or fart idk.. that decides heaven or hell..? 
Just a guess 
πŸ˜‚
5 years agoReply
Speedster
Hah pretty much, It's less like heaven and more like hell, since  you're always in his digestive system, getting digested but never really dying.
5 years agoReply
Tenshi no Yami
@Speedster, 😢 thats terrifying
5 years agoReply
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