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Maria Minx
A quick, sweet moment.
3 years agoReply
SilentExistence
Like that even though this could of gone somewhere further it didn't. There was definitely a very realistic feel to it which can be very rare to find at times.
3 years agoReply
urmom
Omg realism is definitely the thing I go for the most with my writing. I hate seeing romance stories that are all happy and shit cause we all know real relationships aren't always all happy. Actually, most of them aren't. I'm ecstactic that readers are starting to catch on to the realism theme.
3 years agoReply
SilentExistence
@hanshy, Yes tell me about it! I love seeing stuff like this especially since that's the kind of stuff I love writing as well. even in a supernatural world I like to add some realism to it. Relationships aren't so simple.
3 years agoReply
休牛夕仁
omg, the scene is too realistic... it can't be a real story, can it
3 years agoReply
urmom
I intended for this whole story to be as realistic as possible. Closer to how actual relationships are. And yes, this is fictional in a sense. A lot of relationships are like this though, so in that sense its real.
3 years agoReply
休牛夕仁
@hanshy, hope that such tragical experience didn't happen to you
3 years agoReply
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