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瑟雷伊.幻夢
當時為了趕快結束...
最後就沒把本來要寫的寫出來了...
（躲（鑽進小箱箱
點點點點點點不是刪節號嗎？
8 years agoReply
師傅
六個小圓點「......」,是省略號。
8 years agoReply
瑟雷伊.幻夢
@師傅,謝謝
8 years agoReply
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