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小豬瑩瑩
更改了，希望符合題目要求。
3 weeks agoReply
茗那
這樣沒問題囉！
能夠衷心祝福對方，是個好結局呢 ૮꒰˶´˘`˵꒱ა
3 weeks agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
@茗那,謝謝提醒。
3 weeks agoReply
茗那
感謝參與 (*´꒳`*)/
短短的每一句讓讀起來的停頓都剛剛好雷來得突然，結束也毫無預警地到來，我喜歡形容雷聲的部分，就好像慢動作鏡頭呈現在眼前。但最後仍然只剩一人記得當年美好。

△好像沒有感受到與祝福有關的內容（因為是個人感受所以都可以討論）大概是我在題目說明得不夠清楚，我會再去補充 (*；ω人)
3 weeks agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
我會更改一下，謝謝提醒。
3 weeks agoReply
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