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1000fish
有一個地方感覺有點怪怪的
就是一開始是用第一人稱代入的
但到後面：「雨兒沒聽到⋯⋯」
換成第三視角會第一時間反應不了是誰
（還有雨兒跟立軒好甜！）
1 week agoReply
青雪琉璃
對不起....我會想想怎麼修正的!
1 week agoReply
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