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陽壽木魚
莫內不知為何給我一種有點少年的感覺（？挺可愛的
另外主角果然是被內定了呢w
2 days agoReply
Lethe
嗚嗚，我很抱歉後面他的戲份非常少

不內定劇情無法繼續(誤
2 days agoReply
鎖夢籠
為什麼這樣都能搞錯啦w不招人的第一大隊有新人加入應該屬於大事情吧?
3 days agoReply
Lethe
嘿嘿，看下去就知道了
3 days agoReply
大秦書說人
埃塞爾看起來是被內定了，還是被第一大隊的隊長直接內定為什麼傳統是不報上概念？🤔
哈哈，沒有權限不能旁聽
1 week agoReply
Lethe
哈哈，的確類似被內定了

關於為什麼概念不能說後面會有解釋的！
1 week agoReply
楠都月
所以真的有個女配是叫銀冰🤣 

看到這裏，覺得作者文筆不錯，劇情鋪排節奏都適中，會一直吸引讀者閱讀下去呢。

（每個隊員自我介紹時也會加概念名稱有點中二了xddd)
3 weeks agoReply
Lethe
是的，我超喜歡銀冰的~~~越寫越喜歡她

謝謝你的誇獎，我實在很擔心我劇情節奏拖沓(曾被指出過這問題

因為本人也很中二www(誤
3 weeks agoReply
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