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大秦書說人
閣下這故事夠啊，看完抽了根煙才緩過勁來
蘇某求學時不太上心於這些，但是沒吃過魚也看過魚游泳是吧，總會聽說隔壁阿明要打球一堆女生就衝籃球場站位
文字描述流暢，文字之間沒有寫實隱約有留個讀者想像空間的餘地但其實一切都在不言中
在下想要指教一二的地方是有的段落看起來有點語法不通，但這也是青春吸引人的地方吧？畢竟青春是無法以言語正確傳達的

4 months agoReply
楊郁
感謝。
語法不通大概因為我是香港人，加上喜歡用倒裝吧~~
4 months agoReply
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