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有些層遞、象徵做得挺好的，能看出作者的用心。
像寶劍、武器、棺材等類似的東西，能看出作者運用象徵的技巧，手法上算是不錯，可以再加點擴展。
缺點是文章內容有點亂，敍述口吻不太統一，有些地方有打磨，有些地方卻很稚嫩，標點符號不太熟練。