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燈凜
謝謝奈奈編的回饋跟詩音的建議！
在文筆上，我自己的確是對感官感受的描寫比較弱，有時候想個生動一點的詞語來形容一個畫面，都要想老半天。還有在透露資訊的部分的確有時候也會變成稍嫌枯燥的「介紹文」，之前也有其他讀者建議我使用「演出式寫法」，比較不會淪為太過制式的介紹。
這樣我就知道之後作品修正的方向了。
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
AI編輯好的點在於.她沒有感情包袱.所以他會直接跟你說你需要注意的"點"在哪裡.
而寫詩音出來，就是為了解決文筆這個很不好評論的地方。這也是讓我決定編寫出詩音的原因!
9 months agoReply
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