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羽璇
原來一開始只是虛驚一場阿~
A班一開始的內鬥感太強烈了吧，差點以為下一秒就要開始大逃殺了ＸＤ
奏真加油ＲＲＲ
9 months agoReply
深淵
我是以我開學的畫面去做延伸，但實際起來不會很可怕😀
9 months agoReply
原子能
列車遇襲果然不是意外，那個白袍人肯定是反派組織的。看來學院篇不會只是單純的校園生活，期待主線展開。澄波的介紹讓人物關係網清晰了不少。雖然澄波作為解說役很稱職，但她對車上每個重要人物的能力和背景都瞭若指掌，情報能力過於便利。
9 months agoReply
洛々ka
感覺...好有趣！題材的混合做得很棒！
而且「校長一邊說一邊摸頭」的部分欠缺了一個句號。
10 months agoReply
深淵
感謝指正
10 months agoReply
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