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茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

特別有深意的詩歌體呢 :3
以鏡子比喻用得很好，詞語選擇也精準到位，意象清楚。碎掉的鏡成為鋒利的刃，默默地踩過傷痛，為了不再受傷而開始戴上冷酷面具 ( ߹꒳߹ )
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：一首精鍊而富有詩意的短篇詩歌，以復仇與自我保護為主題，通過強烈的意象與哲學語言傳達了痛苦與冷酷的心路歷程。語言精緻、情感真摯，結構與驚喜度稍顯薄弱。
11 months agoReply
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