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killer
@CENPOR 大人，一點意見供您參考
10 months agoReply
CENPOR
谢谢教主大大的心得！！ (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)

其实这部小说的背景是刚结束一战的背景（但我不知道要如何表达才能摆脱古风的框架ಥ⁠_⁠ಥ）。

主角用刀子大战主要是枪械在那个时期是管控的（主角只是种田的富豪，没有黑白道背景）

至于日志为什么在主角父亲的书房主要是因为男主他爸太知道男主的性格，知道他读了日志肯定会想闯入乱世寻找师傅（我的小解读，不大准确的ಠಿ⁠ヮ⁠ಠ）

最后还是感谢教主大大能抽空阅读我的小说，其实故事后面并不是闯江湖。（其实我比较期待教主大大给的评价是我介绍的小说XD）
10 months agoReply
killer
@CENPOR,謝謝大大的回饋！那本書教主會去找來看看的！
10 months agoReply
killer
@CENPOR,順道一提，教主會有那個問題是因為日記是私密的東西，應該不會交給別人，師父那麼厲害也不會被偷走,教主本來眼花以為是師父留信給他，仔細看才發現是日記
10 months agoReply
CENPOR
@killer,其实那本日记是他师傅交给主角他爸的（也许我要加上这个小细节在故事里(⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)）
10 months agoReply
killer
@CENPOR,哦哦,了解了
10 months agoReply
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