Aww, this was so cute! I hope Comet comes back.

Nice!

✍️tho there are a few things that could be improved✍️ like the times... The story starts in the afternoon: "Every afternoon, after...” But soon after, "The night sky above sparkled with...” You could clarify that time is passing as Aru follows the stardust—perhaps mention the sun setting or the sky darkening as she reaches Comet’s lair

Your descriptions are amazing 🪄the dragon, the woods, the stardust, and everything❤️‍🔥 It all feels magical🪄 Excellent work! 🙌