/comment.php?chapter=9&id=126371
Comments - 每週微科幻三句徵文活動 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 每週微科幻三句徵文活動
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
W.H.
一般來說，一個句子是以「句號」來算，你要不要把裡面某些句號，改成逗號？

你這篇故事有詩的感覺，我喜歡～❤️～
3 years agoReply
木刻
改了節奏不對

讓評審去煩惱吧😊
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@木刻,這個創挑用「喜歡數目」決定，不曉得題主能介入多少？

確實，改了節奏會太黏，好像從吃小黃瓜，變成在吃秋葵，哈！
3 years agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.